Well done - Good Shot / Reverse shot technique. You have also varied the shot distance during this sequence well - and you have also editied in a variety of one and two shots effectively. You observe the 180 degree rule throughout. You have one match on action where Sarah walks past the camera and you place an edit and continue her walking from behind. Successful. Your non diegetic sound is well chosen and parallel to the action.
To improve
White Balanace - you have a real proble here. Make sure you set your White Balance continuously throuighout the filming of your Thriller opening. The main problem that you have with light is shooting footage into a brightly lit window - think about the background of your characters as you could have shot somewhere with out a window in the background. Sound - you have a lot of unwanted sound - you will realise now that you are going to have to record your own diegetic sound to accompany your film.
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ReplyDeleteWell done - Good Shot / Reverse shot technique. You have also varied the shot distance during this sequence well - and you have also editied in a variety of one and two shots effectively. You observe the 180 degree rule throughout. You have one match on action where Sarah walks past the camera and you place an edit and continue her walking from behind. Successful. Your non diegetic sound is well chosen and parallel to the action.
To improve
White Balanace - you have a real proble here. Make sure you set your White Balance continuously throuighout the filming of your Thriller opening. The main problem that you have with light is shooting footage into a brightly lit window - think about the background of your characters as you could have shot somewhere with out a window in the background.
Sound - you have a lot of unwanted sound - you will realise now that you are going to have to record your own diegetic sound to accompany your film.